In a wall, once there lived a mouse. & there was a cat that lived outside of the wall. one day the mouse could smell his favorite cheese Norwegian cheese. So, he went out of the wall, the coast was clear, so he went into the kitchen… the cat was there, the mouse started shaking his face went pail but before he knew it the cat jumped on him… the cat missed the & mouse just got away it was not over yet. There was a big woman with a frying pan & they hit the mouse to the hole in the wall.
Hi Joel,
What an awful adventure for the mouse! Congratulations on successfully using our technique of the week, beginning with a “Where Things Are” sentence. I also really enjoyed the detail of the “Norwegian” cheese, as it made your story feel very authentic.
Keep on writing!
Hi Joel,
I really liked this little story and the way you built some suspense into your writing. That mouse must really like Norwegian cheese! I wonder…has he tried Swiss? It’s good!
Keep up the good work.
From Mum.